雅思寫作6大切忌不能有的開頭！廣州雅思英語學(xué)校

有些同學(xué)考雅思作文的時候自信滿滿，等到分?jǐn)?shù)出來了之后傻了眼，我寫的自我感覺還是ok的呀？除了開頭有點沒把握好~

這位童鞋，開頭沒寫好給考官的印象會大打折扣哦~閱卷老師連看的興趣的都沒有了，你的分?jǐn)?shù)怎么會高呢？提高雅思寫作技巧，寫出滿意的雅思作文，小編來幫你詳細盤點下雅思寫作10大切忌不要有的開頭。

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廢話連篇不知所云

典型失敗案例： Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……修改方案：開門見山 直奔主題In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the bookor the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the Internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play Internet games. So we can see the Internet is more and more important in our daily life.Topic 3-The importance of environmental protectionOh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!。

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中式英文人見人暈

典型失敗案例：Topic 1-The happiest moment in your lifeIn our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……Topic 2- The population problemThe population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.Topic 3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice personBeing a nice person have many advantages. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

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觀點模糊態(tài)度曖昧

典型失敗案例： Topic -Should college students be allowed to get married?I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

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偏離主題無軌電車

典型失敗案例：Topic -It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English,music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

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過分簡單沒有重點

典型失敗案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protectionThis issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

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用詞不當(dāng) 表達不準(zhǔn)

典型失敗案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?I think college students should not be allowed to get married because the yare very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

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